y cant i get this rite? someone help

As the moonlight moves across the Goddess face, saddness overwhelms her, she weeps for the love that was lost, she ponders the words she never got to say. Alone in the garden of hopes and dreams she stares at the roses that are in full bloom. She reaches to touch the soft white pedals a thorn catches her finger and bright red blood drops down on to the bloom and turns the rose red! Just then as she sat in the dark, the only light coming from the mood a light snow began to fall.